I'm creating this blog for many reasons, the principal reason is because I´m taking an English III course in summer and I need to create a blog for the class work. Today I´m working in present progressive and simple present, and tomorrow I think I will work with Imperative. I'm excited to create my own blog because I need a place to put all my stuff and a place to express myself. I'm going to put a picture of my favorite place in the world, because I like to travel around the world and I want to visit this place some day. I like the castles and the big gardens like this place so much , that´s the reason why I put this picture with this description. I think you won't enjoy this blog but I am going to enjoy it because is who I am. I want you to know me more so I'm giving a little description of myself. I study high school and I want to study architecture or design, because I like to be creative and get another perspective of the world. I want to photograph all the beautiful moments in my life but I don´t have a camera right now. I'm working to buy a professional camera and then I can freeze every moment I want. I will say goodbye and I hope you enjoy this blog.
1 jun 2010
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I'm creating this blog for many reasons, the principal reason is because I´m taking an English III course in summer and I need to create a blog for the class work. Today I´m working in present progressive and simple present, and tomorrow I think I will work with Imperative. I'm excited to create my own blog because I need a place to put all my stuff and a place to express myself. I'm going to put a picture of my favorite place in the world, because I like to travel around the world and I want to visit this place some day. I like the castles and the big gardens like this place so much , that´s the reason why I put this picture with this description. I think you won't enjoy this blog but I am going to enjoy it because is who I am. I want you to know me more so I'm giving a little description of myself. I study high school and I want to study architecture or design, because I like to be creative and get another perspective of the world. I want to photograph all the beautiful moments in my life but I don´t have a camera right now. I'm working to buy a professional camera and then I can freeze every moment I want. I will say goodbye and I hope you enjoy this blog.
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ResponderEliminarI am thrilled to see how much vocabulary you manage and how well you are writing. I am also excited to see how interesting you ave already made the page. Keep up the good work. Make the changes I told you about if you can, and I'll help you tomorrow with them if there are still errors in your paragraphs. You ahve done a great job for the first day! I'm proud of you already! thanks for the good work.
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Explain simple present and present progressive—when do you use each one? You have done the uses well; right now things and regular occurrences are in the right tenses. You have used the non- action verbs in the right ways; possession, emotions, feelings, senses and perceptions and mental states of thinking and believing, etc. So just explain what you know you have to do with these uses. And now, figure out at least 2 exercises to show you know what to do with each of these tenses. You could do a schedule, like what your summer week days are going to be like, and how today is progressing for you. Describe a photograph and tell cultural differences or cultural ideas of what is normal in Mexico and how that is different from another place in the world (maybe the place in a photograph). I’m thrilled with what you have done so far. You are working for a 100 this summer, from the looks of things!
ResponderEliminarBy the way, I just showed your first work to a teacher who came by, and she was all excited by what she sees you have done. It is obvious you can do very good work, and I am very proud of you for today's job.
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